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學(xué)生背景：

Name: J.姓名：J.同學(xué)

School: US Boarding School學(xué)校：美國某寄宿高中

Accepted School：Harvard University 錄取學(xué)校：哈佛大學(xué)

GPA: 3.9/4.0

TOEFL: NA

SAT: 2360

SAT II SAT:

Biology-E 770 生物：770

Chemistry 730 and 720化學(xué)：730和720

Latin 730 拉丁語：730

Physics 750 物理：750

Math Level II 800 數(shù)學(xué)II：800

Activities:活動(dòng)包括：

1) Raised money annually for hospitals.

每年為醫(yī)院籌集資金

2) Therapeutic skating instructor for children with various mental and physical disabilities (blindness, autism) skating

作為有心理和生理障礙的(如失明,自閉癥)兒童的滑冰治療教練

3) Regional Novice Ladies Bronze Medalist

Regional Novice Ladies銅牌

3) Intermediate Ladies Champion

Intermediate Ladies冠軍

5) Student Chair

學(xué)生主席

6) Current Events Club Head

實(shí)事俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人

7) Tour Guide

導(dǎo)游

8) Tutors sciences to younger students

低年級(jí)學(xué)生的導(dǎo)師

9) Server at homeless shelter for women and children

在收容所為婦女和兒童服務(wù)

10) Internship at MIT

在MIT實(shí)習(xí)

11) Tutored children between 5 and 10 on literacy and math

輔導(dǎo)5-10名孩子的識(shí)字和數(shù)學(xué)

12) Photography Assistant.

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導(dǎo)師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

JL's case demonstrates how Prestige Only supports and successfully mentors high level cases with needs in both Consulting and Test Preparation. Our experienced consultants are backed by a strong academy team, so J was able to receive SAT coaching in addition to the consulting that resulted in her acceptance to Harvard.

J同學(xué)的案例是PO指導(dǎo)的成功案例的典型。我們經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的顧問背后有著強(qiáng)大的學(xué)術(shù)團(tuán)隊(duì)的支持，所以J同學(xué)除咨詢外，能夠得到SAT的訓(xùn)練，進(jìn)而被哈佛大學(xué)錄取。

J signed a Platinum package in the 2nd semester of her Junior year. Though her initial SAT test was only a 2100, she was able to raise this score to a 2360 through 6 months of group and 1-on-1 classes with our Academy team. Furthermore, because of the closeness and information sharing between our Academy and Consulting teams, J's Senior Consultant was also able to focus on her weaknesses in terms of Critical Reading and Grammar when mentoring her through our Reading and Writing Development curriculum. This double-pronged approach--combined with J's work ethic--allowed her to improve her SAT score to one that would be competitive when applying to Top 10 schools.

J同學(xué)是在11年第二學(xué)期簽訂的時(shí)鉑金套餐。雖然初始SAT成績只有2100，在我們學(xué)術(shù)團(tuán)隊(duì)的1對(duì)1輔導(dǎo)后，6個(gè)月內(nèi)成績提高到2360。而且，因?yàn)槲覀儓F(tuán)隊(duì)緊密的信息共享，J同學(xué)的高級(jí)顧問老師可以將學(xué)生的重點(diǎn)放在薄弱項(xiàng)閱讀和語法項(xiàng)。通過我們團(tuán)隊(duì)的和學(xué)生的共同合作，J同學(xué)的SAT進(jìn)步很快，在申請(qǐng)TOP10學(xué)校時(shí)，更有競(jìng)爭力。

J also received expert mentorship to help her grow into leadership roles so that she could display to colleges that she was taking on more responsibility year after year. This was through a combination of coaching the student on how to develop relationships with club sponsors and peers so that she could be appointed or voted to be the leader in the club. Hence, she eventually became Student Chair as well as the Head of Current Events.

J同學(xué)也得到了提升領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力的幫助。通過指導(dǎo)如何跟俱樂部贊助商和志愿者建立關(guān)系，使得她能在俱樂部競(jìng)選時(shí)脫穎而出。她當(dāng)上了學(xué)生會(huì)主席和時(shí)事俱樂部的會(huì)長。

For top students such as J who have stellar and impressive profiles, they tend to be too over confident and as a result do not spend the time necessary brainstorming, editing, and revising their personal statements and supplemental essays. However, with our guidance and coaching, we were able to develop a very strong hook for her PS. Then she tied in the major theme within her PS to her supplemental essays by conveying and extending this theme of understanding the self and the drive for purpose and meaning in family and community.

對(duì)于像J同學(xué)這樣材料背景很好的學(xué)生，他們一般都很自信，他們往往不會(huì)花很多時(shí)間在個(gè)人陳述和短文的頭腦風(fēng)暴，措辭和修改潤色上。在我們的指導(dǎo)下，她的PS變得非常有吸引力。她將所選專業(yè)與PS與其他補(bǔ)充論文的主題進(jìn)行結(jié)合和延展說明。

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Strong Team of Foreign Senior Consultants Graduating from Top 30 US Universities畢業(yè)于美國Top30名校的高級(jí)顧問團(tuán)隊(duì)

PO stands out because our mentorship process is based off of these values which our senior consultants have all experienced firsthand, which allows us to fully prepare our students to not only gain acceptance to university but also to successfully integrate and succeed.

PO的著名在于我們的指導(dǎo)過程的價(jià)值，我們的資深顧問的親身經(jīng)驗(yàn)，使我們可以充分幫學(xué)生做足準(zhǔn)備，學(xué)生收獲的不只是大學(xué)的錄取，更是人生的成功。

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