天道酬勤：成功步入埃默里大學(xué)

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學(xué)生背景：

Name：Y同學(xué)

School：Local Chinese High School w/International Division 學(xué)校：中國本土高中/國際部

Accepted School：Emory University 錄取學(xué)校：埃默里大學(xué)

GPA: ~3.7

AP Courses: N/A

TOEFL: 99

SAT: 2050

SAT II Math 2C: 760 SAT II數(shù)學(xué)2C：760

SAT II Chemistry: 790 SAT II化學(xué)：790

Activities:活動：

Boston University Summer Challenge

波士頓大學(xué)夏季挑戰(zhàn)班

DJ Club Guest DJ

DJ俱樂部 客串DJ

Bifrost Polar Club Member

彩虹橋極地俱樂部成員

“Secret to Becoming International Artists” Co-Host

“成為國家藝術(shù)家的秘訣”聯(lián)合主辦

Blackboard Designer Commissary

黑板設(shè)計師委員

Han Fu Club Vice President

漢服俱樂部副主席

Tomorrow’s Stars Event Coordinator

明日之星競賽協(xié)調(diào)人

Extreme Sports Club Member

極限運(yùn)動俱樂部成員

Community Service:社區(qū)服務(wù)

Me to We Service Trip Participant

Me to We服務(wù)旅行參與者

Awards and Honors:獲獎及榮譽(yù)

2nd Place FLTRP Cup Creative Writing Competition

外研社杯寫作大賽二等獎

3rd Place XinZhi Cup Chinese Creating Writing Competition

XinZhi杯中國寫作大賽三等獎

1st Place “Swan Lake of My Heart” Painting Competition

“我心中的天鵝湖”繪畫大賽一等獎

導(dǎo)師點評：

YZ is unequivocally one of our greatest success cases; in fact, we consider her to be the Prestige Only "mascot" because of how she embodies the success of our philosophy - "Teaching Lifelong Success".

YZ是我們最成功的一個案例，事實上，我們把她看成是PO的代表，因為她充分展現(xiàn)了我們的宗旨——教育成就一生。

Y is hands down one of the most diligent students we have ever come across. She took to heart the value of her education and the sacrifices her parents and others in her familial and social circles make to put her in the best position to succeed. Y is wildly curious and is an undying perfectionist.

Y同學(xué)是我們這最刻苦的學(xué)生。她深知自己的成功與她所受的教育和家人朋友的奉獻(xiàn)密不可分。Y同學(xué)有著很強(qiáng)的好奇心的同時做事又一絲不茍盡善盡美。

Attending a local school at which extracurricular activities take an extreme backseat to preparing for state-mandated exams, Y was torn in many different directions all at once—would she quit her passions of painting and piano in favor of a tunnel-vision approach to test preparation? Understanding the importance of maintaining a well-balanaced profile, PO coached Y through approaches to effective time management such that she would have space and time for all of her obligations and her pastimes. This preliminary effort had a more than positive effect on her later high work ethic when college application season approached. Moreover, the care that Y's Senior Consultant demonstrated for Y was seen in her increased happiness and well being, provided by the balance that she fought so hard to achieve.

在她所在的當(dāng)?shù)貙W(xué)校，課外活動被繁重的學(xué)業(yè)考試所拖累，這讓她感到彷徨——難道要用自己熱愛的繪畫和鋼琴作為妥協(xié)來換取應(yīng)試教育的成功么?充分理解生活平衡的重要性，通過PO的引導(dǎo)，Y同學(xué)學(xué)會了如何有效的管理自己的時間，這使她有了充足的時間和空間去完成課上和課外的工作。這一初步理念也使得她在申請更高學(xué)府時變得游刃有余，并且在PO導(dǎo)師的引導(dǎo)和她自己的努力下，她本人也變得活潑開朗健康大方了。

Essay brainstorming and polishing aside, the biggest personal challenge for Y was in major selection. Driven by the need to inspire and influence, she was naturally drawn to learning about Communications, Public Relations and Marketing but knew very little of what these entailed beyond what her parents mentioned off-hand. Compounding this confusion was her family’s hope she would study Business or Economics, despite having little previous experience. PO had many an earnest conversation regarding major choice, careers offered and the sovereignty she held, ultimately concluding she would follow a happy medium, as her passions were crucial in deciding, yes, but it was critical to remain open to all possibilities.

除了怎么樣雕琢自己的論文外，Y同學(xué)的最大挑戰(zhàn)無異于如何選擇合適的專業(yè)。在創(chuàng)造力和影響力的驅(qū)使下，她選擇了傳媒專業(yè)，公共關(guān)系專業(yè)和市場營銷學(xué)專業(yè)，但她本人對這些學(xué)科知之甚少，而且她的在父母沒有任何從商的經(jīng)驗的情況下，本希望她選擇商科。PO在綜合了專業(yè)選擇，未來就業(yè)和個人傾向后，給了她最權(quán)威的指導(dǎo)，對Y來講快樂和熱情雖然對最終決定至關(guān)重要，但更重要的是有一顆接納更多可能性的心。

As Y heads off to college, we are confident that she has been inspired and equipped by PO with the necessary skills to succeed in every possible endeavor.

隨著Y同學(xué)步入大學(xué)，我們相信她會帶著PO人傳承的良好素質(zhì)邁向成功。

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